Nowadays, individuals are taking their families abroad with them on every business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages for individuals and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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People trying to involve their family in their
business
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tour
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are very common today.
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has so many positives as well as negatives too. In my ,opinion it is not a good way of practice as it could distract the person from concentrating on their
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and
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irritate the family member with boring meetings.
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way of carrying a loved one through their way will improve the affection of their relationship by forming a sense of caring. And
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it is a channel for developing a standard knowledge in their
business
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through interactions.
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,once in an interview, Mr Mukesh Ambany states that, flies with his family which influenced
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to
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involved
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in his
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.
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, it may distract the man from his
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because he has to care about two tasks. There is a chance of losing his complete concentration on the meet which could result in the failure of the project.
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, they may get bored due to the busy scheduled
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or with the silent environment there. They became unable to enjoy the trip. To sum up with,
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there are several factors that may come up with
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topic, in my opinion, it is always better to do a
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trip alone
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could improve concentration on
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as well as never make others boring with our schedule.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Work-life balance
  • Cultural exposure
  • Logistical challenges
  • Educational opportunities
  • Financial cost
  • Adaptability
  • Family unity
  • Cultural shock
  • Broadened horizons
  • Disruption
  • Distraction
  • Support network
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