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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays online education is provided to university
students
 in their curriculum. While evaluating the thing we could see more disadvantages than advantages. It adversely
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students
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 practical knowledge
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 their interest
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 those topics. As the study
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materials
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internet
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 which
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helps
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students
 to get the theory part with a single click. And
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 them to spend their whole day in school. They are able to learn
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whenever
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when ever
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 they want from their own home itself.
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 facility.
On the other hand
, there occurs a lack of practice
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. We
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 that practical knowledge is an essential thing in
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everyone's
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 study.
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, they won't
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thave
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 that concentration anymore.
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, a research study result by IU university showed
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their theoretical
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who
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done their
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academic
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academic
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. To sum up,
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 curriculum, in my opinion,
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 than its positive side by pointing
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 of practicals and loss of interest in their subjects.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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