Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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With the recent trend of the use of other types of
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, there are concerns
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their ineffectiveness and harmful contents. I agree completely with
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school of thought.
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is mostly because these options are natively produced and most times do not have dosage advice. These alternative forms of
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are largely ineffective.
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, in my hometown, native herbs are cooked together for
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of malaria, pile and skin infections. Most people who opt for these options do so out of ignorance, cultural beliefs and the mindset that they are more effective than approved
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.
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, in reality,
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persons patronize the herb sellers for the treatment of the same illnesses as they realise that they still do not feel better.
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, the ineffectiveness of these options. Despite their non-productivity, they are
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harmful to one's health.
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, they are prepared in an unclean environment with a lot of human interferences,
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, the chances of contamination of the herbal mix
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high.
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, there is usually no defined measurement in the consumption of
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, a customer who complains of malaria will be sold
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mixture and quantity
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another who requests
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high fever treatment.
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, it is sometimes referred to as "one
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that cures all illnesses". I completely agree that other types of
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are not only ineffective but
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unsafe for human consumption,
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, should not be encouraged. People should be sensitized
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the negative effects of consuming them while healthy and approved
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should be made affordable to all. In conclusion, the new trend
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patronizing other forms of
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should be discouraged. The people should be continuously sensitized
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their ineffectiveness which
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lead
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to
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a waste
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of money and
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the danger it poses to their health as it could worsen the health concerns or even create new ones.
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