People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In
this
Linking Words
Add a hyphen
fast-moving
fast moving
world, all are facing various types of problems Add a hyphen
fast-moving
where as
Correct your spelling
whereas
individuals
leading their life in Use synonyms
metropolis
are ongoing numerous difficulties in their day Add an article
the metropolis
today
life and Correct your spelling
to day
also
some are raising questions to solve the issue to the Linking Words
government
that Use synonyms
government
officials should motivate people to migrate to Use synonyms
towns
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, cities are holding Linking Words
heay
population than Correct your spelling
heavy
it's
estimated Correct your spelling
its
count
. Add the comma(s)
,count
Furthermore
, roads are Linking Words
conjusted
due to Correct your spelling
congested
conducted
conjured
Correct your spelling
heavy
heay
traffic caused by Correct your spelling
heavy
individuals
. People cannot manage time due to traffic. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
accidents
rates are Change the noun form
accident
drasticaly
increasing. Most of the cities are not constructed with Correct your spelling
drastically
undergound
water harvesting. All the land area are occupied by roads and building so Correct your spelling
underground
natural
disaster like are flood are Add an article
a natural
Correct your spelling
occurring
occuring
more frequently. These are the major Correct your spelling
occurring
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
individuals
are facing in cities. Use synonyms
For example
, Chennai city is affected by Linking Words
flood
every year due to Fix the agreement mistake
floods
the
improper city plan construction.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, Most Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
individuals
are Add an article
the individuals
stayig
in Correct your spelling
staying
metroplis
due to its facilities. Correct your spelling
metropolis
Government
should appreciate citizens to migrate to local Use synonyms
towns
by providing the necessary amenities in Use synonyms
towns
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the basic amenities like Linking Words
good
Correct article usage
a good
Correct your spelling
education
eduaction
system, proper health care and high employment opportunity should be developed by Correct your spelling
education
Use synonyms
government
in regional areas. Add an article
the government
In addition
, to the safety of Linking Words
individuals
Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
police
policie
Correct your spelling
police
station
, courts and local play areas for children are some advanced Fix the agreement mistake
stations
Correct your spelling
facilities
facilites
for Correct your spelling
facilities
them which
will motivate people to shift to regional areas.To illustrate, In Correct pronoun usage
that
recent
Add an article
a recent
survey
it is shown that Add a comma
,survey
india
is concentrating more on developing local Change the capitalization
India
towns
by providing all the necessary facilities to Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
citizens
citzens
and motivating them to shift to their native Correct your spelling
citizens
towns
and lead a good life Use synonyms
from
thereChange preposition
apply
itself
.
To sum up, Correct pronoun usage
apply
Use synonyms
government
should solve the problems Add an article
the government
facing
Wrong verb form
faced
by
Change preposition
apply
individuals
living in Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
cities
cites
by developing regional Correct your spelling
cities
towns
and Use synonyms
encourage
them to relocate there.Wrong verb form
encouraging
Submitted by subeash.r on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?