Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

It has been observed that there is

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fixed retirement

age

. Many argue that a few industries should allow their employees to retire prior to the set

age

and benefit

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the pension facility too. From my viewpoint,

this

argument stands true and I will shed some light in the upcoming paragraphs.

Additionally

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essay will highlight

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of workers who should be

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entitled

entitiled

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this

privilege. From my perspective, some organisations require the young generation over the older generation.

In other words

,

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companies scout young talent and train them to play.

Moreover

, considering the physical fitness a player could perform well till the

age

of thirty-five.

Thus

, it is vital for them to retire around that

age

to bolster their own health. Some well-known players get

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to coach the

next

batch,

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not everyone gets

this

job.

Hence

, early life

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monetary

support with retirement will help them to support their family.

Furthermore

, there are many sets of workers who should be allowed to leave the company early and receive the pension amount.

Firstly

, crew members from the aviation industry. They are on their toes and cater

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customers. They may not be agile later in their life to continue doing

this

work.

Secondly

, army employees should be eligible as they are under

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constant

content

contant

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constant

pressure. They could serve the country and

then

willingly retire.

Lastly

, drivers who are attached to behemoth companies like Ola or

Ubber

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Uber

should reduce their

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age

because some

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could later have poor eyesight leading to accidents. To summarise, many

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organisations

orgaisations

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organisations

demand workers with fitness and their ability to work may reduce with their

age

. It's cardinal to support

such

employees by honouring them with an early retirement plan and

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sum of money.

Likewise

, individuals from the aviation industry, army and drivers should avail

this

facility.