Mrs Barrett, an English speaking woman who lives in your town has advertised for someone to help her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, suggest how you could help her in her home, say why you would like to do this work and explain when you will and will be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, As I passed by your house, I saw the signage that you were looking for some assistance. In fact, I could be of help to you by removing the grass, cleaning your house and washing the dishes. Recently, I completed plumbing vocational studies so if there are any leaks in your kitchen or utility areas, I can repair them. You have been very instrumental in my successful scholarship grant by giving

such

great advice, so allow me to return the favour by supporting you for a couple of hours

this

coming summer.

In addition

, I would like myself to be productive rather than spending time bingeing on Netflix or playing computer games. I am available and I can start

this

week Monday,

however

on Sundays I won't make it since I am

also

volunteering in the church ministries. I'm looking forward to seeing you and supporting you in the

coming days. Yours sincerely, Mia

Submitted by lonathem on Sun Jun 26 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

159 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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