Many people think that home cooked food is healthy, but many people still prefer eating out. Why is this so? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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are usually eating outside because it will get more convenient than cooking themselves at home.
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, there is
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comfortable way called
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delivery which is suitable for
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who do not want to go outside or
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other
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during the
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period. In my opinion, both ways
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on lifestyle.
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at home
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their own must have enough time preparing
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or think about what the meals for that day is, what should they do and going shopping at the market, it is quite a waste of time for me.
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, cooking at home can make sure that you choose the best kind of
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and stuffs you like.
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, when I have free time I would
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to
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by myself and helping other family members
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ingrediant
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my
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country
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national holiday.
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, if you
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an unhealthy
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unhealthy food
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, bad
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ingredients
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ingredients
that are not good for your health too. On
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day, there are a lot of healthy
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restaurants
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restaurants
around the town which is
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multiple
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for you to select. In
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, it
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on the situation and lifestyle. Your life, your choice.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast-paced
  • convenience
  • gourmet experience
  • cuisines
  • replicate
  • socialize
  • festive atmosphere
  • glamorized
  • cost-effective
  • groceries
  • budget-friendly
  • loyalty programs
  • delivery services
  • diverse dining options
  • eating habits
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