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Shops should give preference to selling local foods rather than imported foods. Do you agree or disagree?

#shops #foods
It has been suggested that markets and vendors ought to
priotise
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prioritise
 selling of local
food
 over
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foreign
foriegn
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foreign
 consumables. While
this
 is often most appropriate, sales of imported
food
has
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its
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their
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 own advantages too. Dealing
in
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with
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 locally sourced
food
boost
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boosts
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 the
genenal
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general
 wellbeing of any given community.
Firstly
, more
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stringent
strident
strigent
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strict
 regulations are put in place to
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monitor
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monitory
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monitor
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 the production of consumables to ensure that the
food
 available to buyers
are
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is
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 not only fortified with the necessary vitamins and minerals but
are
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is
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also
 made under the most
hygenic
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hygienic
 conditions
thus
 improving
on
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the satisfaction derived from eating them.
Secondly
,
food
 made in the immediate locality
are
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 suited to the nutritional needs of the indigenes
that
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 locality. Residents are assured of fresh produce when
such
 are procured from nearby sources rather than imports. In general, giving preference to local
food
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foodstuffs
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stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
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 will have a ripple effect on the economy of the nation.
For example
, farmers who supply grains and dairy products receive payments that are returned back to their businesses and eventually the economy of that locality.
On the other hand
, the sale of imported
food
 though hinders the development of
local
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the local
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food
 market has given purchasers varieties of
food
 options
thus
 making the satisfaction of the human pallet desirable.
Moreover
, preference for stocking up on
foerign
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foreign
 foods in shops is more often than not influenced by the local demands of a community. It is
also
 worthy of note that
priotising
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prioritising
foriegn
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foreign
food
 items in shops will invariably increase the national foreign exchange benefits. In conclusion, the sale of local
food
 in shops should be of utmost priority to procurement officers as against the importance given to foreign foods.
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