You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic Television injects violence in children, and programs with violent scenes should be banned. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As a new parent, I completely agree

to

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statement that the current

television

program

injects violence

in

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children and the violent scenes should be banned. As a normal people, unlike the previous generation, the current generation

are

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spending more of their leisure time in front of

television

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the television

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and

this

creates a huge business

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opportunity

oppurtunity

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opportunity

for the entertainment industry.

Therefore

, the

television

industry is coming up with all

type

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types

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of

programs

to keep people engaged with the electronic screens.

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of these

programs

have adolescent contents, violent scenes, and content shows which would directly or indirectly

supports

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or objects

the

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agenda or

propoganda

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propaganda

of various governments. As an example, I would like to discuss

about

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a wrestling

program

that is

being globally telecasted for more than 25 years now. These wrestling shows are acted by trained professionals as per the entertaining scripts developed by the

program

operators. These shows are very well marketed amongst

the

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young kids.

Although

, they mention during the

program

that these wrestling moves must not be tried at home. The content shown in these

programs

are

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so intimidating for the children at home to try and at times it

have

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caused serious life-threatening injuries to the young schoolgoers.

Nevertheless

, there are many educational shows and

programs

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available

in

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the

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television

, but the shows which

has

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violent scenes or actions are grabbing the attention of young kids and these shows

becomes

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commercially

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successful

sucessfull

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successful

.

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my opinion that a proper

television

sensor

program

must be operated by the authorities to reduce or control the violence shown

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television

and protect the future of our generation.