You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic Television injects violence in children, and programs with violent scenes should be banned. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As a new parent, I completely agree

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statement that the current

television

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program

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injects violence

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children and the violent scenes should be banned. As a normal people, unlike the previous generation, the current generation

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spending more of their leisure time in front of

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television

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the television

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and

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creates a huge business

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opportunity

oppurtunity

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opportunity

for the entertainment industry.

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, the

television

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industry is coming up with all

type

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types

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of

programs

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to keep people engaged with the electronic screens.

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of these

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have adolescent contents, violent scenes, and content shows which would directly or indirectly

supports

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or objects

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agenda or

propoganda

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propaganda

of various governments. As an example, I would like to discuss

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a wrestling

program

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being globally telecasted for more than 25 years now. These wrestling shows are acted by trained professionals as per the entertaining scripts developed by the

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operators. These shows are very well marketed amongst

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young kids.

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, they mention during the

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that these wrestling moves must not be tried at home. The content shown in these

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are

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so intimidating for the children at home to try and at times it

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caused serious life-threatening injuries to the young schoolgoers.

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, there are many educational shows and

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available

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the

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television

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, but the shows which

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violent scenes or actions are grabbing the attention of young kids and these shows

becomes

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commercially

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successful

sucessfull

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successful

.

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, it is

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my opinion that a proper

television

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sensor

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must be operated by the authorities to reduce or control the violence shown

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television

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and protect the future of our generation.