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As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems?

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The bar chart compares the proportion of Australian
women
 who gave
birth
 in different
age
 groups in the years 1966, 1986 and 2006. It is clear that
women
 preferred to have a
child
 at greater
age
 categories over the period shown. The
percentage
 of
women
 aged 30 -34 and 34-39 who tended to have a
child
 increased. While the proportion of females who gave
birth
 in the
age
 group of under 19 and 19-24 decreased. In 1966, the
percentage
 of females who gave
birth
 under 19 year-olds was highest, at about 62 per
cent
.
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percentage
 of
women
 who had a
child
 was at
age
 of 25-30, at about 35 per
cent
. The highest
percentage
 of females who gave
birth
 in 1986 was 25-30, with about 50 per
cent
. In 2006, the
age
 of giving
birth
 approximately increased. 45 per
cent
 of
women
 tended to have a
child
 at 30-34 year-olds which was
highest
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. The proportion of
women
 who wanted to give
birth
 over 40 year-olds is least in all three years, and they were nearly stable at an average of about 3 per
cent
.
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