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the information about buying coffee and tea and drinking habit of people in five various Australian cities.

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The table depicts the outcomes of a
questionare
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questionnaire
question
 of how often people buy and drink
a
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different types of
coffee
 in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, Brisbane,
Adelaide
, and
Hobart
 of Australia. The
first
 option is
bought
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to buy
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 fresh
coffee
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
.
In
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Sydney
 has 45.7 per
cent
 of
city
residents
 and has almost the same amount as
Melbourne
 which is 42.2 per
cent
. Brisbane and
Adelaide
 have
a
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nearly
same
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 amount, 34.2 per
cent
 and 34.4 per
cent
.
Next
,
Hobart
 has 38.3 per
cent
. The
second
 line is bought instant
coffee
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
.
Brisbanehas
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Brisbane has
Brisbane
 52.6 per
cent
.
Other
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 two cities that have
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almost
most
amost
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almost
 the same
number
 are
Adelaide
, 49.8 per
cent
, and
Melbourne
, 48.3 per
cent
. The lowest
number
 is 45.5 per
cent
of
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Sydney
 and The highest
number
 is 54.1 per
cent
of
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in
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Hobart
. The
last
 option of the survey shows the percentage of
city
residents
 that went to a
cafe’
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cafe
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 for
coffee
 or
tea
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
. In
sydney
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Sydney
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, people went to a
cafe’
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cafe
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 for
coffee
 or
tea
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
 61 per
cent
 of
city
residents
. In Brisbane, citizens went to a
cafe’for
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cafe for
coffee
of
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or
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tea
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
 55.4 per
cent
. The lowest is
Adelaide
that
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which
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 shows 49.9 per
cent
 of
city
residents
. In
Hobart
, people went to a cafe’ for
coffee
of
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or
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tea
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
62.7
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 per
cent
. The highest is
Melbourne
that
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which
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 shows 63.3 per
cent
. In conclusion, the highest
number
 of the survey is the percentage of
city
residents
 that went to a cafe for
coffee
 or
tea
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
 because
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it
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is
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it
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 shows almost the highest percentage in 3 types.
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