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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house than buy one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a property?

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It is often argued that in some nations, individuals, are more likely in favour of renting
a
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 apartment or a
house
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instead
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 of purchasing it.
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house
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 on lease rather than buying it. Nowadays, it is very common that
people
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have
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 to move to different countries with respect to their work.
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, renting a
house
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 becomes very convenient with regard to
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.
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, in the present
times
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 if a person needs to relocate to some other place, it is very easy to rent a fully furnished apartment online only with all the amenities.
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, owning a personal home requires a lot of
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maintenance
maintainance
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maintenance
 whereas in
case
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the case
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 of rental
property
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 it has to be taken care
by
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 the owner. To illustrate, in a survey, conducted in the urban areas of
the
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Korea, most of the
people
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preferred
preffered
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preferred
 to have rental apartments as the problems arising with concern to electricity, water supply or any repairs are handled by the
property
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 owners.
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, renting a home makes
life
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the life
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 of
people
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more
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easier and simpler.
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, there are some drawbacks
also
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such
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 as a
people
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 spend a lot of money from their monthly income
in
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 paying the rent and still the
property
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 does not belong to them. The best example of
this
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 can be seen in countries in the middle east where
expats
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ex-pats
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 are not allowed to purchase the
property
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,
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however
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 they spend a huge sum of their income
in
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 paying rent.
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, owning a personal home gives a sense of security which can not be attained by renting an
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apartment
apartmnet
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apartment
.
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, in most of the countryside regions in India
people
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 have their own houses and for
them
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 it is an asset which can be helpful in any bad financial circumstances.
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, having
ones
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 own
house
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 provides
a
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financial security
which
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 the rental ones can never
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fulfil
fullfill
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fulfil
. To conclude, renting a
house
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 has both the advantages as well as disadvantages. On one
hand
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 it provides easy relocation for the
people
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where as
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 on the counter side it lacks to provide a sense of security
to
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 the individual which is gained by having a personal
property
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.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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