“Subjects such as drama and music are just as important as maths and languages.” Do you agree?

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or knowing how to be written a song must consider in academy schedule

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who has more creativity and having better communication skills to handle problems to secure their lives on the earth ,according to some scientific articles has been demonstrated that individual that can play a piano or violin has more power to understanding

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.some scientist has been recommended the children must learn playing a musical instrument ,

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, these can be expanded the knowledge of students with teaching the essential lessons in human life .It is

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better speaking and reading

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. Conclusion To sum up, Art

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and drama are important as

maths

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in faculties because , these will be constructing our child with more creativity , better communication skills and less

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