Many people join online learning programs and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree? Use good reasons and examples

Nowadays,

students

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opportunities to choose where to

study

the courses. Some

students

want to learn the

classes

from

home

, but

other

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think that learning from

home

will get less benefit from studying at

school

.

This

statement will clarify

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both thoughts and show my opinion. On the one hand,

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study

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from

home

will

makes

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students

get more comfortable because they are in their

comfortable

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zone.

In addition

, it will

less

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the stress

from

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the

students

.

For example

, some children have stress from teachers and some

classes

that they

are not understand

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.

However

,

students

could pay less attention

from

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classes

because they can play games or watch

video

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from

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on

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internet

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while the teachers are teaching.

Furthermore

, they can

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the exam during the test.

On the other hand

,

learn

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from

school

is a good

opportunities

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for

students

. They will get to know their friends and will get to learn

there

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their

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passive

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skill

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that

school

did not teach.

Moreover

,

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onsite will give benefit than

study

online because when the

students

do not understand in the class, the

teaches

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teachers

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can clarify what they do

no

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not

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understand. According to the scientist, they said "

study

onsite is better than

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studying

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online because it will make

student

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students

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enjoy

about

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school

and less the stress that

students

have." In my opinion, I totally agree that attending

to

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classes

at

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college

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collage

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will give more

benefit

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benefits

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to the

students

more

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apply

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than

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studying

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online. From experience, I had to learn at

home

because of the Coronavirus, But it turns out not as good as I expected, I do not get to see my friends and teachers.

In

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this

situation told me that learning at

school

is fun and more

enjoy

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than

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studying

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online.