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The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is too raise age limit for younger drivers. Do you agree or disagree?

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In modern society, the
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 for driving should be increased for road protection. I strongly agree with the statement owing to the reasons given below.
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 of all, by increasing the
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 one can reduce traffic or road accidents.Youngsters drive harshly to show off thereby creating injuries.Due to impulsive behaviour, rules and regulations may not be followed creating hazards to others.
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, as per newspaper reports about
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 are by teenagers. Young drivers are not mature enough to handle the consequences of careless driving.
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 by raising the
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 the government can make sure that rules are strictly followed.
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, older drivers have experiences in life and can handle any emergencies in
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 short run than the youth.
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 young generation violates rules and laws.
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 increasing
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 would help safety. In my personal opinion than increasing
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all group should follow laws for better protection. To conclude, older generations have experiences and will follow laws thereby reducing road accidents compared to the younger generation.
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 I agree
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 the statement.
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