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the chart above explaining about the export earnings between 2015 and 2016 and the percentage of each category compared with every year. Overall we can see that from 2015 to 2016 there had been a gradual increase. 

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with there are various categories of exports from the highest to the lowest bring in

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2015-2016. The

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thing we can notice is that the values percentage of petroleum products gained a tiny fraction, in spite of, it had

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the most of all export list in 2015-2016.

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, engineered goods and textiles had rapidly grown from others, particularly textiles despite it being the least,

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it had significantly increased from 2015 to 2016 and was up to more than 15%.

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, there has been an increase in agricultural products even though it was being the least growth.

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, after looking at those four items there has been a slightly different in gems and jewellery which dip up to 5.18% from 2015. To summarize, the highest earnings value of it was still from petroleum products and there was an opportunity for two

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as engineered goods and textiles to contribute more in the future.