In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

​In some countries, some residents claim that it is essential to

spent

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finance on building new railway lines to make the

trains

faster.

However

, some people think that the

budget

should be spent on public transportations which have existed. ​On one hand, most

of

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the people are addicted to

take

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a trip by

trains

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train

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although

it takes a long time and there are some accidents which are happening because of old railway lines. Travelling by train is more interesting, comfortable and peaceful rather than the other transportations.

However

, visitors will not be satisfied enough to travel by

trains

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if it takes a long time to reach their goals. When it is dangerous and thrilling to travel by

trains

because of the desolate railways,

citizen’s

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security will be terrible. For these reasons, some people think that it is vital to make new railway lines. ​

On the other hand

, some citizens believe that the government should spend the finance on improving existing public transport as

this

is only necessary to be repaired and one of the ways to save the

budget

. Some car roads are in

bad

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a bad

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situation because of the terrible weather

such

as heavy rain and high temperature. After

that

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the roads are damaged and cankerous due to the accidents which are happening for careless drivers. If they just need to repair, a small amount of

budget

should be spent on

this

.

Instead

of spending

money

on building new roads, the government should

spent

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money

on other situations. ​In conclusion, from my point of view, spending

budget

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on repairing the existing public transport is better than spending

money

on constructing finance on new railways. The more

money

we can save, the more benefits we can have. ​