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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #waste #time
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 barrier is a normal obstacle when we learn a new
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 nowadays, we use computers to get what foreign words meant immediately, I strongly disagree to abandon learning a foreign
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 because the
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 has 2 main flaws which are perfection in context and its availability.
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 of all, even though
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translater
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a translater
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 can translate a single word mostly seamless, translating context is out of the question.
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, it can't decipher a page of a Thai novel into English without some funny-looking phrases. To illustrate
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even
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 more, they can translate
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the Thai
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 idiom from what should mean "waste too much effort for small yield" into "ride an elephant, catch hopper" .
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, it is essential to know the background of the
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 in order to understand them correctly.
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, the
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 is not something you can use everywhere and at any time.
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, despite the world's best internet connection and the greatest
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 a married couple who
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different
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a different
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language
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 could buy, it would be awkward if they can't talk to each other just because of the
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 malfunction.
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, not completely
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 on uncertainty and
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learning
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 a foreign
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 is a wiser choice. In conclusion, even improved computers will is not flawless
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 learning the
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 is definitely
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. To give another example, you would rather confess your love with your own mouth than let it mimics for you.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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