In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, with the advancement of technology and economics, upgrading traffic conditions has become a more focused topic than before. And some individuals believe that great sums of funds should be applied to constructing a new type of railway lines that operate fast trains between metropolises. While others oppose and claim that those funds need to be used for promoting current public

transit

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we will discuss both views

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and suggest my partial opinions based on various reasons

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. On the one hand, building a new type of fast train will improve the efficiency of

transit

, which prompts inter-area trading and

therefore

promotes the development level of economics. Companies will be more capable of sending employees to another metropolis to negotiate and make commercial deals.

For example

, research showed that with the high-speed railways being constructed in China, the economic connection between metropolises had become closer and most metropolises' development levels extra increased by 10% from 2010 to 2016.

On the other hand

, paying more attention to reform of current public

transit

has a great impact on decreasing the frequency of traffic jams that occurred in the city centre,

besides

, it will definitely raise the cities' operating efficiency. If public

transit

such

as buses and underground are arranged more and more reasonably, "Rush Hours" will be relieved dramatically. To exemplify that, research conducted in Guangzhou has demonstrated that, from 2010 to 2015, with a more advanced underground system coming into use, the number of personal vehicles during rush hours had decreased by 15%.

Therefore

, from my perspective, it is vital and unavoidable to spend the necessary funds on constructing more effective railways between cities, but at the same time, improving current societal

transit

cannot be neglected. To summarize, governments should spend more on building new types of railway systems, but they need to pay attention to existing societal

transit

simultaneously

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so that our city can develop more complete and perfect.