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Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#activity #effect #plants #world #people #time #action
We must accept that human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animals all over the world.
However
, some
people
 think that it is too late to do something about it, while,
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others think there is still time to take effective action.
This
 topic sheds light on the
people
's understanding
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 the
human's
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 impact on
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nature and how
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rapidly
rapidily
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rapidly
 we are depleting the non-renewable resources of
this
 planet, which will have
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 effect on our future
generation
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. I will discuss below my opinion on both the sides of
this
 topic: It is the responsibility of the world leaders to educate the common public on the results of various sustainable
measure
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 implemented globally to prevent the plants and animals. It is true to
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 extent, that the plants and the animals are disturbed by
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humans because the forests are shrinking faster than ever due to the rapid urbanisation. All the world governments are acknowledging the impact on nature and have developed several Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) to reduce the effect. The implementation of these goals had produced phenomenal results in controlling global warming potential.
Therefore
, it is never too late in implementing any good practices that would protect
this
 earth. On the other side, some think that we have time to act on the rapidly increasing global temperature. As I mentioned above, the information to the common
people
 regarding
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ozone layer depletion has not
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 properly. If these
people
 are educated on
this
 subject
then
 they will not think that there is sufficient time to protect the forests and
its
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 occupants. In conclusion, we must agree that it is never too late or it is never too early when it comes to
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 any best practices that would protect
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mother nature and its
belonings
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belongings
beings
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