Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drink scientifically proven bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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that the

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must care about

people

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health

and

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not be allowed to buy bad food or drinks .I vehemently accord with the given statement . In

this

discourse , I will expound my accordance along with credible

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. The chief rationalization for my agreement comes from heterogeneous

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.

Firstly

, the most discernible nub is

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protect

. To be more specific , there are saving the

person

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health

through the

shop

. For an instance , they get rid

the

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bad food ,

also

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break

brake

breake

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break

the low , so it is a considerable way to save the

people

and

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environment

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envernment

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government

. Another paramount ground for my belief is

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parent's

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comfort .

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, when their children go to the

shop

the family will be relaxed because

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are useful . In comparison , the

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of

father

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in the healthy

shop

is much

more

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better than

the

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unhealthy

shop

. Is there any other

reason

behind my agreement ?

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certainly there

are

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people

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reach the addiction and the main

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is

first

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experience so, it is smart low . these are

somp

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some

top-notch

reason's

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for my agreeing

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the presented argument . To summarize the composition , the essay explicated my accordance with

people

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health

, not only

this

but it

also

shed light on

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reason's

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of

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it . So , I fully agree with

this

phenomenon .