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Some people in developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibility towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is true that developed
countries
 are more privileged to have all the resources to reduce global warming than developing
countries
.
However
,I agree with the opponents that both
countries
 should share equal responsibility for protecting their habitat.
This
 essay will explain both sides. On the one hand,
Although
,developed
countries
 may have a high level of duty to protect the environment due to improved industrialization.
In other words
, there are many industries in modern
countries
 that promote the use of dangerous chemicals
such
 as fossil fuels to run their business and
this
 in turn has an effect on the climate.Even though it serves as a source of income for the nation and other
countries
,the impact on the environment should not be ignored
instead
 it is to be tackled by all means by passing laws that restrict the use of these harmful substances and encouraged the use of renewable energy.
Additionally
,developed
countries
 possess resources and good systems that can aid good practices
such
 as recycling, and renewable energy sources like solar.
Hence
,they are capable of preservation of the environment.
On the other hand
,developing
countries
 have the same responsibilities.
That is
, it does not matter how little the contribution is,it will definitely address the current situation of their country and moreso improve the climatic change which will at the end result is a comfortable living for everyone.
For example
,discouraging excessive land tillage in agriculture.,
Also
 the government should ban the cutting of trees because all of these practices when curbed, will lead to more sustainable living. To sum up, sustainable living can be attained by both the developing
countries
 and developed
countries
 by holding up to the responsibilities of environmental conservation.
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