Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to get a university education in many countries. Some people believe that universities and authorities should help them so that they can get a university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Students

from disadvantaged

family

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families

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and countryside

areas

are finding it difficult to attend a

university

education

in many countries. Most

people

think that

universities

and

authorities

should help them so that they can attend

to

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university

education

. There

are

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no doubt that most

students

from poor families and

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rural

rual

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rural

areas

are difficult to get a

university

education

. Some

of

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students

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the students

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can't afford to

university

and

also

barriers

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. 

Thus

, I strongly agree that

universities

and

authorities

should help them so that they can get a

university

education

.  In fact, most

students

in

countryside

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the countryside

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have less

opportunity

to attend to

university

education

because

of

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they can afford the

university

fee.

Hence

, if

universities

and

authorities

help them to reduce

the

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school’s

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fee

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or give them an

opportunity

to study it will help them a

lots

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in many positive ways.

Firstly

, improve their critical thinking. Of course, they will become more

patients

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and

also

make

wisely

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decision

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decisions

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. Because

of

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study not only teach them how to be

success

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people

it

also

teach

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teaches

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them how to be

morality

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and

virtue

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. I would like to share my experience in

this

case. I used to be aggressive

behavior

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when

people

around against

with

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my idea, but when I attended

to

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university

I have

learn

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learned

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a

lots

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lot

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from my lecturer and

also

change my

behavior

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.

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, studying

in

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give

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students

in

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many benefits ways. So, the

universities

and

authorities

should help them so they can get a

university

to change their lives.

Secondly

, studying in

universities

help

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students

from disadvantaged families and

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rural

rual

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rural

areas

have

opportunity

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the opportunity

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to work in other counties. In fact, when

students

finished

in

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universities

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university

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it

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times

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for them to seek

the

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job. If they were outstanding

students

in the class they have many opportunities to work everywhere they wanted.

For example

,

a lots

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a lot

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of

students

in Cambodia have opportunities to work in many counties in

world

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and most of them

are

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come from poor rural

areas

and some of them are orphans.

This

is show

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up that everyone can be

leaders

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if they have

chance

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a chance

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to get

a

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university

. With all the cases I have been using above, we can make a conclusion that

leader

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can come from all levels of

people

no matter where they

from

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are from

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. If

universities

and

authorities

give them an

opportunity

to get a

university

everything can happen and

also

change their lives.