Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
It is sometimes argued that there are more residents
want
to live independently alone or with their friends Correct pronoun usage
who want
instead
of living with family, it
can lead to some problems in Correct pronoun usage
which
social
. While there might be some benefits to Replace the word
society
support
that idea, I maintain that we should not support that idea. On the one hand, there are clear arguments that can Wrong verb form
supporting
freedomly
live separately from their parents nowadays. One of the main reasons can be that the younger generations think that they are old enough to have an independent life which will make them can Correct your spelling
freedom
freedomly
do whatever they want and may help them to overcome barriers of family's protection. Correct your spelling
freedom
For example
, when living alone, they will know how to take care of themselves and living with friends also
help
them to learn other skills they have never known Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
that
before. Correct word choice
apply
Therefore
, they could be more responsible with
all things they do as well as the communities. Change preposition
for
On the other hand
, I agree with the viewpoint that they should not live
Correct your spelling
give
away
their family for many reasons. Add the preposition
fromaway
Firstly
, I believe that this
trend will have many negative effects on the
communication. Correct article usage
apply
A recent
research details that there are more people Correct the article-noun agreement
Recent
especially
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,especially
in
the young are becoming Change preposition
apply
more easy
to get depression or autism due to the lack of Replace the words
easier
supports
from their Fix the agreement mistake
support
family
when they choose to live alone. Fix the agreement mistake
families
Secondly
, We can say that it's really difficult for us to find a good partner to live with. Because of lacking the experience of
controlling their activities, the young can take the risk of getting involved in crime if they live with reckless friends. In conclusion, it seems to me that living independently or with family can provide several significant benefits for Change preposition
in
social
and individuals as well.Replace the word
society
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion