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Some people believe that teacher should be strict in order to best motivate students while others say that friendly teachers are more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

#people #teacher #students #teachers
In every
society
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teachers
 are considered to be a guiding light for their
students
 in order to bring the best out of them. Achieving the goal
for
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of
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 building better adults some believe it is better to have a softer
approach
 towards the
students
, while others argue a sterner stance by the
teachers
 is more useful to shape
students
as
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into
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 better humans. The argument for
softer
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a softer
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approach
 explains the importance of nourishment required by
teachers
 for motivating their
students
. As they believe a stricter environment will lead kids to a rebellious path from where it gets extremely difficult to reverse that outcome.
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, a pupil
constantly
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ending
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ends
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 up in quarrels and mischievous acts
needs
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 an empathetic
approach
 to handle and explain the consequences of his actions to bring a
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long lasting
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 change in his attitude. While others believe that a stricter teacher will make
students
 aware of the harsh realities of life and
constant
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 struggle required to become a successful human
being
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beings
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. During
childhood
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 it is impossible for the infants to have knowledge of the actual
life
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 conditions and what it takes to bring an
earning
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earnings
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 for a family.
Therefore
, strong actions are needed to be taken when they dismay from the ideal course.
Such
 actions not only result in making the
students
 more obedient, but they
also
 inculcate strong life principles and high moral standards. All in all, countries need better citizens who are motivated enough to construct a more prosperous society. While a calmer
approach
 might seem enduring love and care but it does little help in the final goal achievement.
This
 goal can only be achieved when we have
teachers
 with greater control
on
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 how much deviation they allow for their
students
.
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