Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

There are many

rules

against the use of hard

drugs

such

as heroin and cocaine in many nations. From my own perspective, I believe that the same obligations applied to prohibition and selling of hard

drugs

should be applied to all

drugs

without the exception of tobacco and liquor and

this

essay will discuss

this

notion.

To begin

with, ingestion of harmful

drugs

irrespective of their type can cause health problems to the body system. Excessive drinking of

alcohol

can lead to addiction while intake of tobacco can result in mental instability.

For instance

, a study carried out in a private hospital in China revealed that 80% of the case of mental problems were a result of drinking

alcohol

.

Thus

, in order to reduce the rate at which

people

consume

alcohol

, strict

rules

guiding hard

drugs

should be followed concerning the consumption of

alcohol

.

Furthermore

, when there is a law against

drugs

,

this

will make

people

responsible. What

this

means is that more citizens will be highly concerned about their development rather than thinking of

alcohol

.

For instance

, in India,

people

are banned from drinking

alcohol

and smoking which in turn made the majority of the residents responsible.

Thus

, it has

also

reduced crime rates. In conclusion, I equally believe

rules

guiding

people

to purchase and sell hard

drugs

should be applicable to other illegal

drugs

as well.

This

is because these

drugs

impose a danger to

people

's health.

However

, if there are strict

rules

guiding it, many individuals will be responsible and

this

in return decreases the rate at which

people

are involved in crimes. Moreso, some agencies should be employed for

this

special task. To be sincere, many things

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broken in my house but the one, I'm going to talk about for the purpose of

this

examination, was our washing

machine

that got spoilt.

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fateful day, everybody was at home in the sitting rooms watching television, that was when we heard a loud thunder strike, we were all scared but to our surprise, it

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did not

didn't

affect our Tv but the washing

machine

got spoilt because it was on, my mom was washing my dad's clothes. We felt blue because the

machine

has been helping in easing our stress. That same day, my dad told it to the Engineer's shop for repair because we cannot imagine our life without

this

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machine

.