Do you agree that education will change a criminal?

Education

is the fundamental core of human civilization, it helps people not only gain the essential knowledge

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but

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learn the common rules of the world,

respecting

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lives

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, races,

rights

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and rights

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do matter.

Education

can purify the soul of a person,

furthermore

, it can help

criminals

become

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better

person

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. No one is born to be a criminal, in most cases, people lacking better

education

or living under unprivileged circumstances

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their

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early

ages

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are likely to commit a crime. Because they have

less opportunity

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fewer opportunities

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to get a decent job to make a living and the worsening financial situation forces them to involve in a crime, like

robbery

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a robbery

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or stealing. Educating

criminals

in prison will improve their chance to lead a better life after they are released. Educating

criminals

can help them get requirements and knowledge of some jobs and build their confidence to face the new circumstance, If the government can apply various courses of educational degrees, it will benefit the

criminals

and decrease the rate of recommitting a crime. In the past, prisoners used to be forced to work, they could not learn anything from those repetitive jobs,

instead

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they felt they were treated like slaves

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foster their resentment toward

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society.

On the other hand

, learning a subject in which people have

interest

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will enrich their

life

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and make them feel successful. It will encourage more prisoners to study even from the stretch. In conclusion,

education

is the most efficient option

to

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diverse a person. It will reduce the

criminal

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rate.