In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes their.

The population of
this
world is soaring at
rapid
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rate and having a
place
to live is one of the basic necessities of humankind. As the availability of plots to build the houses in the
center
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of the city is scarce, people have started to construct them in the suburban area far from the city. Some might argue that
this
trend has to be stopped to preserve the villages. I
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strongly
stongly
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strongly
agree
to
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this
view and shall elaborate on the details to substantiate my stand in the following paragraphs. While needing a
place
to live is the obvious reason
to
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building a house, let us commence by inspecting the principal demerit of constructing buildings to dwell in the outskirts, which is the risk of losing trees and agricultural lands. To explain more on
this
, individuals find a
place
in the suburbs
that is
far from the metropolitan to construct their houses as there is no
land
in the urban area, which leads to cutting down of the trees and encroaching
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field that
were
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used by farmers to grow food.
Moreover
, individuals from various parts of the state moving to the outskirts might disrupt the culture of the clan that were living there for multiple generations. For the aforementioned reasons, the suburbs and the agricultural lands have to be preserved. There are many ways to tackle
this
issue,
on
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of them being the government not giving
approval
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to construct houses on the agricultural
land
. In conclusion,
although
a
place
to live is one of the basic needs of mankind and scarcity of
land
in the city forces individuals to build their
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in
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the outskirts.
This
trend might pose
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of losing farming
land
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would lead to famine. It is,
therefore
, crucial to preserve the villages.
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  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
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  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
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