Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Everyone’s goals and pursuits are different, everyone has their own way of living. Some
people
prefer stable life and prevent changing, the others prefer following the pace of
times
and
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to
change
. I would say both
argument's
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have validity, but I would lean towards the latter. The life of
people
avoiding
change
are
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more stable and less stressful. They can spend their lives
to enjoy
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what they like
instead
of chasing the pace of the
times
. They can avoid the stress of changing, like
learn
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a language,
immigrate
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to other countries or
find
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a new job. They can
also
satisfied
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easily
by
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a small things
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than others.
However
,
people
will be overtaken if
you
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they
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are satisfied with the status for a while.
People
need to
change
as the pace of the world is always changing.
For instance
, the technology of today is advanced, everyone is using
the
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digital products.
Therefore
, learning basic electronic knowledge is important,
otherwise
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we will be out of touch with
the
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society and be
elminated
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eliminated
by the
times
.
In addition
, changing can
makes
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our lives better and train our willpower. Every time you fight with difficulties, you will be more powerful and steady. In short, I think
change
is always a good
things
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and my own view is that the world is always changing, we need to learn and
change
to prevent elimination by the
times
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • mastery
  • innovation
  • adaptability
  • personal growth
  • resilience
  • hesitancy
  • risk-taking
  • transitions
  • enrichment
  • equilibrium
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