Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Everyone’s goals and pursuits are different, everyone has their own way of living. Some
people
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prefer stable life and prevent changing, the others prefer following the pace of
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and
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to
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. I would say both
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have validity, but I would lean towards the latter. The life of
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avoiding
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are
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more stable and less stressful. They can spend their lives
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what they like
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of chasing the pace of the
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. They can avoid the stress of changing, like
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a language,
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to other countries or
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a new job. They can
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satisfied
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easily
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a small things
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than others.
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,
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will be overtaken if
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are satisfied with the status for a while.
People
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need to
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as the pace of the world is always changing.
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, the technology of today is advanced, everyone is using
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digital products.
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, learning basic electronic knowledge is important,
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otherwise
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we will be out of touch with
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society and be
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eliminated
by the
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, changing can
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our lives better and train our willpower. Every time you fight with difficulties, you will be more powerful and steady. In short, I think
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is always a good
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and my own view is that the world is always changing, we need to learn and
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to prevent elimination by the
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