The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.
The charts illustrate the proportions of the different purposes of
water
used in six countries in the world.
Overall
, there are three parts to using drink industrial, agricultural, and domestic. The largest significant segment of using drinks in South America, Africa, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
was agriculture. While
utilizing water
for all countries the smallest rate was domestic.
It is clear that
water
consumption for industrial only has high numbers of two countries which was North America and Europe at around 13% and 15% perfectively. Whereas
the lowest industrial for utilizing water
was in Central Area at about 5%. In contrast
, Agriculture was a substantially higher proportion of consumption water
approximately 88% in Central Asia
.
Central Asia
,
and South East Remove the comma
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Asia
were the nation that have domestic water
is
the least and have the same figure at around 7%. Unnecessary verb
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While
Africa has 9% for domestic use of water
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