The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts provide the information regarding usage of
water
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for different
purposed
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in six countries in the world
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, it can be seen that the major
of
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percentage
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the percentage
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of using
the
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water
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by
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agriculture was
South
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in South
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America
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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.
Whereas
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, in Europe and North
America
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industries assist the most. Getting back to the details, it can be noticed that in Central
Asia
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,
water
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used by
agriculture
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the agriculture
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sector was the most 88%. Followed by
Africa
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84
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%, South East
Asia
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81
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%, South
America
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71
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%, North
America
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39
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%, and Europe
32
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%.
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, domestic
water
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can be spotted minimum in all areas except
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19% in North
America
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, 9% in
Africa
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, and 7% in Central
Asia
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. Probing
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, industries are the main important for using
water
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in North
America
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48
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% and in Europe
53
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%, and
minor
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proportion of
water
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used for industrial can be seen
7
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% and 5% in
Africa
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and Central
Asia
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perfectively.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, africa, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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