Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

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culture for a long time,

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is meaningful in every

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. Some people think learning

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from school is helpful for teenagers which can affect the performance of other subjects. In my opinion,

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set

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some advantages and disadvantages. Each

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different personal characteristics,

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all the children have high grade or performance after learning

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. Sometimes, children learning

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or

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some

artworks

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a difficult thing for them because not every child

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a sense of talent

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, teenagers may be tired

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having

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lessons at school,

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bored but

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children

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to try and explore,

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it is necessary for them to know

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knowledge of the

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people’s

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, which can improve the ability of imagination by

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with paintings or the sculptures and it

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students

some fundamental skills

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doing artwork. There are several functions of

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art

which make

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influence

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human’s

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development. One of the main points of history

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be recorded is that people use

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to record their life

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so that

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culture’s

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history through those artworks. To sum up,

art

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an important place in

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societies and cultures. Even though there were some drawbacks of force

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some benefits for teenagers

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study

in

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art

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