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The maps illustrate Felixstone between 1967 and 2001 before and after the renovation. Overall,
Felixstone
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Felixstowe
 was rather modern and had different facilities like a
hotel
, shops and a fish market.
However
, it has undergone significant changes
such
 as a pier and
a
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farmland
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 and
a
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 construction of some new objects. In 1967,
High
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 street to the north of the town was surrounded by several shops. There was the Gulf course and
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farmland on the sides of them. The marina with a pier was located to the south. To the
west
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 there were dunes and a
hotel
 with a café near them.
Moreover
, a fish market was situated
next
 to the marina. In 2001, the town was modernized:
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 farmland was replaced by a
hotel
 with a tennis court and a swimming pool near it.
Furthermore
, the fish market was demolished and substituted
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 a private beach and the marina with the pier was replaced by a public one. A car park was constructed near the
hotel
 and wind turbines appeared
next
 to the dunes.
Besides
, some apartments were built
instead
 of the shops to the east of
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 street.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer culture
  • Marketing strategies
  • E-commerce
  • Proliferation
  • Socializing
  • Self-expression
  • Identity formation
  • Materialism
  • Instant gratification
  • Trendy
  • Leisure activity
  • Frequent purchases
  • Accessible
  • Convenient
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