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Some languages spoken by very few people are losing their importance and may become extinct completely. Is it a good or bad development? What are the reasons for this?

Ostensibly, a
number
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 are
at
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 the verge of extinction because the
number
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 of
people
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 who speak the
languages
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have
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 gradually decreased. Since it is a threat to the
importance
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 of
such
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languages
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,
this
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 is not a welcoming trend.
This
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 essay will delve deeper into the reasons behind
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 a phenomenon in the impending paragraphs.
To begin
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 with, the main reason behind
this
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 unsuitable development for these
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 is the impact of the professional world and the related
languages
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. To cite an example, a survey conducted by The Guardian newspaper in March 2015 revealed that 8% of some rarest
languages
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 have not been getting
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adequate
importance
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 in society because
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 speakers were inclined
towards
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toward
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 internationally acceptable
languages
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.
In addition
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,
as
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a
number
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 of
people
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 consider a person who can speak a globally accepted language easily more intelligent than a person who speaks a less popular language.
Hence
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,
this
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 tendency is jeopardising the existence of
such
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languages
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.
Furthermore
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, the lack of teachers available in society to teach these
languages
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 is another big reason.
For instance
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, grammar and pronunciation issues can hinder
people
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 from speaking
such
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languages
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.
Moreover
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, the role of governments is inevitable to save the existence and
importance
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 of less spoken
languages
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 by adding up them in the syllabus or in the constitution
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 as in
Indian
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the Indian
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 constitution part X has mentioned the list of 22
languages
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 which is not only good for its presence but
also
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 a saviour of the relatable cultural texts. To conclude, it is unequivocal that due to the influence of international
languages
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 and
absence
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the absence
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 of trainers, the
number
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 of
people
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 and the
importance
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 of some
languages
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 are decreasing constantly which is obviously a bad development and may be a danger
for
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to
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 the existence of these
languages
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.

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