During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. He suggested you should contact him for a possible job opportunity. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: * remind him when and where you met * tell him what kind of job you are interested in * say why you think you would be suitable for this job

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Dear Mr Singh, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing to you in relation to a job requirement in the restaurants owned by you. I meet you on a plane journey from Australia to India on the 24th of May. I was sitting just

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to you and we had a conversation too in which you asked me to contact you in case I need a job in one of your restaurants. As I told you earlier that I was an accountant in my previous firm.

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, I am wishing to perform

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task. Apart from

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, I can

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do other jobs related to accounting standards like Accounts Manager. I find myself suitable for the position because of my experience and expertise in

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field for about five years. I can apply

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knowledge in order to maintain the inventory needed in the hotel as well as update the accounting records. It would be really appreciable if you could give me an opportunity to work with you. Looking forward to hearing a positive and speedy response from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

188 words

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