During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. He suggested you should contact him for a possible job opportunity. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: * remind him when and where you met * tell him what kind of job you are interested in * say why you think you would be suitable for this job

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Dear Mr Singh, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing to you in relation to a job requirement in the restaurants owned by you. I meet you on a plane journey from Australia to India on the 24th of May. I was sitting just

to you and we had a conversation too in which you asked me to contact you in case I need a job in one of your restaurants. As I told you earlier that I was an accountant in my previous firm.

Thus

, I am wishing to perform

this

task. Apart from

this

, I can

also

do other jobs related to accounting standards like Accounts Manager. I find myself suitable for the position because of my experience and expertise in

this

field for about five years. I can apply

this

knowledge in order to maintain the inventory needed in the hotel as well as update the accounting records. It would be really appreciable if you could give me an opportunity to work with you. Looking forward to hearing a positive and speedy response from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

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