Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?

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food
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has polarized public opinion . Few folks opine that the countries should export the several
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of
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from other nation serves the interest of it is presence in
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way , while other cliques of men divulge that it is
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dubious matter . At the start , there are prolific points to agree with the meritorious side which is income . To be more specific , they are increasing the level of the earnings through sale
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prodects
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products
in all countries . For an instance , Oman has hot weather ,
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they have a special type of
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because
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their weather .
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result , they are
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calling
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selling
a critical kind of
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the
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that why they get the highest number of money through it . Another positive outlook is
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. Actually , these days they see development in all areas of life ,
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point , especially in
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. To be more honest ,
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human can not leave without
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,
also
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they are trying
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share
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with
another nation
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. In comparison , the advantages of it
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really more than drawbacks .
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, it is
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that the thorns of
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area can not be neglected . The most
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aspecte
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aspect
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is alteration .
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, they are using the new
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products
more than healthy foods .
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,
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they
forgeting
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forgetting
their traditional
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and they are using it rather than
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. To summarize the composition , the essay explicated the advantages of the
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import , not only
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but it
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shed light on
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disadvantages . Regarding
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discourse ,
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the pros
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outweigh the cons .
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