There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reeption area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear manager,
I have checked the three complaints to our reception desk about
Susan
's work. All the guests' disappointments point to her unprofessional attitude and performances
. To be Fix the agreement mistake
performance
Correct your spelling
specific
percific
, we are a tourist agency, but she could not answer the questions Correct your spelling
specific
of
the programs we haveChange preposition
about
,
and even the exact working time of the office.
To be Remove the comma
apply
honestly
, the reception hall is so Replace the word
honest
crusial
to a tourism Correct your spelling
crucial
Correct your spelling
company
comany
that it's the Correct your spelling
company
first
sight of a new guest, and the competition of this
realm is dramestic
. Unfortunately, our formal staff Alice is Correct your spelling
dramatic
in
Change preposition
on
maternery
leave, and Correct your spelling
maternity
Susan
is in her internship work for one month. After that, Aliya, another formal young staff will take turn
Fix the agreement mistake
turns
to handle
Change the verb form
handling
the
daily job of Alice.
For my suggestion, I suppose we could find another colleague Change the word
their
her
his
such
as Sam to assist and train the work of Susan
as soon as possible. And if she still could not quality
the request Replace the word
qualify
of
the position, we must dismiss her immediately. I have checked the schedule that Sam is available to help Change preposition
for
Susan
on
every Monday and Saturday.
I wish Change preposition
apply
this
could be workable.
Best,
Wu ShanSubmitted by 7303138 on
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,