Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

The supplied table displays the population in Australia by nationality while the pie chart shows the population of various nations by area. Overall, Is is clear that in Australia the highest percentage of areas are covered by
Australians
and these are
Australians
who have more nationalities in the countryside and the lowest in cities compared to the others. The pie chart depicts that 73% and 7% of areas are occupied by
Australians
and New Zealanders respectively. There is a minute percentage of Dutch,British,and Chinese as compared to the other nations by 14%. The table of nationality shows that 99% of Chinese nationalities holder lives in the city compared to the 1% in the countryside. While the four other nations have the lowest ratio in cities that Chinese but in the countryside
Australians
win the race by 20%.
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