In modern society , there has been a major concern that many couple have delayed parenthood. Some explanations for this social trend will be put forward before an analysis of its impacts on society and family life is given. Advantage and disadvantage this trend?

Having children is the
first
wish of each parent and
also
, is an amazing emotion in our life. While recently because of some reasons that I will explain below, some young couples prefer to do
this
issue later. In
this
essay, I will mention some reasons and effects behind
this
matter, and
then
conclude whether
this
trend has benefits or drawbacks for
society
. Always children for families and countries were a valuable capital, who can be useful at home and for other outdoor activities
such
as working on the farm so they could gain income for their families. Nowadays, our lifestyle is changed. in fact, some
equipments
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,as well as appliances, help us to have a more convenient life rather than in past.
Moreover
, new couples facing with various problems
such
as financial problems, not having a home or a home with little space which not suitable for a new baby.
Also
, some of the new pair tend to continue their education or find a job with good-paying, so, prefer to do not have any consider from kids.
such
that idea has a significant effect on
society
that a few of them are good and most have a bad impact in the community. one good impact is new pair have more time to identify their tastes and being more ready to accept
this
important duty.
on the other hand
, if young couples delay parenthood
society
face to reduce population rate.
For instance
, in Iran, the government have
this
problem, research show, that in the
next
ten years Iran has a negative population growth rate,
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government deals with old people who have more costs
instead
of benefits.
In addition
, children due to their sense of happiness can create a pleasant atmosphere in
society
they are energetic and have a lot of
potentials
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until making an advanced country. In conclusion, delaying parenthood might have a few benefits, and most of them are just good for themselves but have a lot of disadvantages for
society
. of course, the government must provide a desirable condition that new
pair
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pairs
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have more passion
about
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childbearing.
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