In modern society , there has been a major concern that many couple have delayed parenthood. Some explanations for this social trend will be put forward before an analysis of its impacts on society and family life is given. Advantage and disadvantage this trend?
Having children is the
first
wish of each parent and also
, is an amazing emotion in our life. While recently because of some reasons that I will explain below, some young couples prefer to do this
issue later. In this
essay, I will mention some reasons and effects behind this
matter, and then
conclude whether this
trend has benefits or drawbacks for society
.
Always children for families and countries were a valuable capital, who can be useful at home and for other outdoor activities such
as working on the farm so they could gain income for their families. Nowadays, our lifestyle is changed. in fact, some equipments
,as well as appliances, help us to have a more convenient life rather than in past. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
Moreover
, new couples facing with various problems such
as financial problems, not having a home or a home with little space which not suitable for a new baby. Also
, some of the new pair tend to continue their education or find a job with good-paying, so, prefer to do not have any consider from kids.
such
that idea has a significant effect on society
that a few of them are good and most have a bad impact in the community. one good impact is new pair have more time to identify their tastes and being more ready to accept this
important duty. on the other hand
, if young couples delay parenthood society
face to reduce population rate. For instance
, in Iran, the government have this
problem, research show, that in the next
ten years Iran has a negative population growth rate, the
government deals with old people who have more costs Correct word choice
and the
instead
of benefits. In addition
, children due to their sense of happiness can create a pleasant atmosphere in society
they are energetic and have a lot of potentials
until making an advanced country.
In conclusion, delaying parenthood might have a few benefits, and most of them are just good for themselves but have a lot of disadvantages for Fix the agreement mistake
potential
society
. of course, the government must provide a desirable condition that new pair
have more passion Fix the agreement mistake
pairs
about
childbearing.Change preposition
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