In modern society , there has been a major concern that many couple have delayed parenthood. Some explanations for this social trend will be put forward before an analysis of its impacts on society and family life is given. Advantage and disadvantage this trend?
Having children is the
first
wish of each parent and Linking Words
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, is an amazing emotion in our life. While recently because of some reasons that I will explain below, some young couples prefer to do Linking Words
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issue later. In Linking Words
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essay, I will mention some reasons and effects behind Linking Words
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matter, and Linking Words
then
conclude whether Linking Words
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trend has benefits or drawbacks for Linking Words
society
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Always children for families and countries were a valuable capital, who can be useful at home and for other outdoor activities Use synonyms
such
as working on the farm so they could gain income for their families. Nowadays, our lifestyle is changed. in fact, some Linking Words
equipments
,as well as appliances, help us to have a more convenient life rather than in past. Change the wording
equipment
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pieces of equipment
Moreover
, new couples facing with various problems Linking Words
such
as financial problems, not having a home or a home with little space which not suitable for a new baby. Linking Words
Also
, some of the new pair tend to continue their education or find a job with good-paying, so, prefer to do not have any consider from kids.
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such
that idea has a significant effect on Linking Words
society
that a few of them are good and most have a bad impact in the community. one good impact is new pair have more time to identify their tastes and being more ready to accept Use synonyms
this
important duty. Linking Words
on the other hand
, if young couples delay parenthood Linking Words
society
face to reduce population rate. Use synonyms
For instance
, in Iran, the government have Linking Words
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problem, research show, that in the Linking Words
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ten years Iran has a negative population growth rate, Linking Words
the
government deals with old people who have more costs Correct word choice
and the
instead
of benefits. Linking Words
In addition
, children due to their sense of happiness can create a pleasant atmosphere in Linking Words
society
they are energetic and have a lot of Use synonyms
potentials
until making an advanced country.
In conclusion, delaying parenthood might have a few benefits, and most of them are just good for themselves but have a lot of disadvantages for Fix the agreement mistake
potential
society
. of course, the government must provide a desirable condition that new Use synonyms
pair
have more passion Fix the agreement mistake
pairs
about
childbearing.Change preposition
for
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