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Some people think that it is better to educate girls and boys in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #girls #boys #schools #benefit
Splitting girls and boys put in the different classes for training at a school is a thesis of some individual of
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 that have many debaters who emphasize and allege there are better option to attend with together ,
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 statement and I am going to account some advantages it.
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beginning
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begining
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, Learning for youngers is a
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 time to expand their abilities and
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strengths
strength
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strengths
 among their classmates , so the environment with both
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 has been raised the possibility of getting new skills from other sexuality and familiar with
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strengths
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strenghts
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strengths
 and weaknesses of each
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, males often show more authority on their competition , while females are more sympathetic with their rivals ,
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 their desires and sympathetic is very important in teamworking so ,freshers can be learned different skills to handle their future life.
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other
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 hand , society included men and women , so , It is an essential part of
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 living to communicate with both ,and it must be created
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in
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 early
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 to organize the personality of a child ,
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 ,the scientific study has been conducted by Finland in 2020 give much information about children and divide children
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 two groups ,
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 group with the
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gender
 has got higher scores on maths and painting ,while
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 group which has been
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 has
a good grades
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 on one area of science. In general , Based on the form of human society with two
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,developing more abilities which can be learned from a male or a female ,so It has been concluded that the statement
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 believed the class with both sexual
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 have more advantages than
seprated
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separated
 group.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educate
  • separate schools
  • mixed schools
  • benefit
  • attending
  • advantages
  • focused
  • tailored education
  • reducing distractions
  • academic performance
  • gender-specific
  • learning needs
  • teaching methods
  • promotes
  • social interaction
  • real world
  • fosters
  • understanding
  • cooperation
  • healthy relationships
  • broader range
  • perspectives
  • experiences
  • combination
  • targeted learning environments
  • encouraging
  • social integration
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