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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Section of students think school assignments can be done in teams, others would like to
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 individually. In my opinion, I believe delivering projects in
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group
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 environment will improve
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 management and team-building skills for the future growth of the
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. On the one hand, I agree
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 working will be beneficial for the students.
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, the assignment can be completed faster and even before time.
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, the
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 can be divided based on the skills and activities. These activities can be done in parallel, so
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 will save time for the
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Secondly
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, learners or
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 can improve team management competency.
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, everyone in the
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 will gain experience
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 understanding the emotional quotient of the team member, which will help in the future workplace.
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, one aspect of the individual job is,
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 will enhance the planning and focus abilities of the person.
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,
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 single person has to structure the project and deliver all the elements.
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, processing the
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along
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 will improve the self-confidence of the individual.
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 means the student can take on difficult projects by
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themself
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. In conclusion, while some
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 may support individual operations.
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, in my opinion, I support
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 which will build team working competency for the future growth of the
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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