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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

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Dear
Ms.
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 Anna Lobo, It's been a long time since we have spoken to each other via phone or mail.
Last
 week during a school reunion, I got to know that your end of service is the end of
this
 month. During the reunion, John, who was in the same class and year mentioned as, we were remembering our old school memories. You were an excellent and favourite teacher to date. You had a unique ability to teach dry History
subject
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 in the story-telling method and that made the learning very interesting & practical. The teaching technique applied
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 you has made a big impact
in
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 my work career. I use story-telling
skill
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 to explain difficult concepts to clients and teams in the company.
This
 competency has
also
 helped me in my job interviews. I would like to thank you for providing
this
 exposure during our school days. I wish you a healthy and wonderful post-retirement life ahead. I look forward to
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 from you soon. Yours faithfully Jack Scully
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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