Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the high speed and pressure of contemporary lifestyles are harmful to family

life

. I totally agree with

this

opinion because the fast pace leads to less

time

for families to be together and stress leads to arguments among family

members

.

To begin

with, the main reason why I believe family

life

is being negatively affected is that the fast pace leads to less

time

with each other.

As a result

of the increasing demands of society, people spend most of their

time

at work and their social lives, so less

time

is left for families.

Likewise

, we have developed a range of bad habits of spending our leisure

time

using our phones , and so there is a lack of social interaction among family

members

.

For instance

, I usually devote about 2 hours at the end of the day chatting with friends,

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and surfing

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the internet,

instead

of communicating with each

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.

Secondly

, another reason why I support the statement

that

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is that

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strain causes arguments among family

members

. With a hectic schedule, they have just a little or no

time

to interact and understand each other, posing a

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threat

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to the family soul.

For example

, students not only study at school but

also

have to do

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homework

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home work

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.

Therefore

, they don’t have proper quality

time

for their family.

Besides

, when people are stressed, they get easily irritated and act over

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themselves

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.

This

affects other

members

, leading to broken

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relationships. In conclusion, I completely agree with the notion that family can be detrimentally impacted by the expedition and tension of modern

life

because the fast pace leads to less

time

for families and strain causes conflicts among family

members

. In my opinion, apart from meeting the demands of

life

, we

also

need to set aside regular times for our family.