Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the amount of using computers and technology is more and more increasing.

Furthermore

, we are

also

using it for

the

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education which is called "Online Class" during the COVID-19 situation

that

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we

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must have a computer, iPad or laptop in almost every class. I totally believe that everything in

this

world

has two sides. I will examine these questions below by considering the obvious agree and disagree in

this

way. First and foremost, as, adult we have to tell the kids how it actually works

of using

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computers and technology, how long it would take in a day and how

properly

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use it.

This

has three main benefits.

Firstly

,

using

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it for education and

do

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research because the internet is an enormous

world

that is

a big source of information.

Secondly

, use it for relaxing by playing games, watching movies and series and doing social media

such

as chatting with friends.

Thirdly

, it makes the

world

closer If you have foreign friends or relatives who

living

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live

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on the other side of

this

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world

. There are some considerable downsides. The main disadvantage is when they

used

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use

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it in the wrong way

this

will affect younger ones directly.

For instance

, using a laptop

while

studying in class and paying attention to the computer games

instead

of the lecturer affects the kids' future careers.

Moreover

, the social media

world

makes people lazier and

avoids

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seeing people in person or in reality.

For example

, online shopping decreases the number of customers who go shopping on their own.

Or food

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Food

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delivery makes our population eat inside more than going out at

the

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a

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restaurant. In conclusion,

although

using computers for studying may benefit children, If we can not control them properly, we have to keep an eye on the kids and teach them how.