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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

#computer #effect #children
Nowadays, the amount of using computers and technology is more and more increasing.
Furthermore
, we are
also
 using it for
the
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apply
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education which is called "Online Class" during the COVID-19 situation
that
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we
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 must have a computer, iPad or laptop in almost every class. I totally believe that everything in
this
world
 has two sides. I will examine these questions below by considering the obvious agree and disagree in
this
 way. First and foremost, as, adult we have to tell the kids how it actually works
of using
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to use
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 computers and technology, how long it would take in a day and how
properly
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to properly
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 use it.
This
 has three main benefits.
Firstly
,
using
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use
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 it for education and
do
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research because the internet is an enormous
world
that is
 a big source of information.
Secondly
, use it for relaxing by playing games, watching movies and series and doing social media
such
 as chatting with friends.
Thirdly
, it makes the
world
 closer If you have foreign friends or relatives who
living
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live
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 on the other side of
this
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the
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world
. There are some considerable downsides. The main disadvantage is when they
used
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use
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 it in the wrong way
this
 will affect younger ones directly.
For instance
, using a laptop
while
 studying in class and paying attention to the computer games
instead
 of the lecturer affects the kids' future careers.
Moreover
, the social media
world
 makes people lazier and
avoids
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avoid
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seeing people in person or in reality.
For example
, online shopping decreases the number of customers who go shopping on their own.
Or food
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Food
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 delivery makes our population eat inside more than going out at
the
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a
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 restaurant. In conclusion,
although
 using computers for studying may benefit children, If we can not control them properly, we have to keep an eye on the kids and teach them how.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cyber safety
  • screen time
  • cognitive development
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • social isolation
  • digital literacy
  • interactive learning
  • virtual communication
  • physical well-being
  • academic performance
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