You have recently started a job in a new company.Write a letter to an English speaking friend.In your letter, Explain why you changed the job Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news

Dear Sam, I

Hope

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you and

you

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your

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family are doing well. I am

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excited

exicted

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excited

to share

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the

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news with you that

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have switched my job from a local computer software

developing

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company to Google. The

first

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thing which motivated me to Change my profession was that google is paying almost double

salary

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my salary

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compare

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to my

last

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company

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income.

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this

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firm is providing

incentive

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which will be fruitful for me as well as my family. I would to tell you about my new job in which I am working as a software developer with experienced team members of

google

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, I am working from home which is beneficial for me because it would save my travelling time. Oh, another thing I wanted to mention

that

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am coming to Canada in

december

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. I hope you will

free

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and we will make

plan

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for The Christmas party because it is a long time

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since we

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did not see each other. I am looking

for

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apply

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forward

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to hearing from you. All the best, John nick

komal03892

Jul 1, 2022

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

175 words

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