Some people prefer to shop in supermarkets, while others like shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Covid 19 has completely changed the world we live in. Shopping online is
also
in trend again because of the covid 19. Many people
still prefer the traditional shopping way
, but many including myself like to shop
on the internet. In
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This
this
essay, will discuss both views followed by a conclusion.
To begin
with, physical shopping helps the local market and supports local businessmen. When you buy directly from the shop
you are helping the owner instead
of the brand. Additionally
, when you shop
physically you know the quality of the product. This
will save your
time because you do not have to return the product. Correct pronoun usage
you
For instance
, as surveys suggest half of the items bought online are returned because of quality issues and other reasons. Furthermore
, the traditional way
of shopping is also
a great social gathering. people
usually shop
with friends and enjoy their get-togethers. Hence
, physical shopping provides social gathering, quality
assurance and supports the local market.
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and quality
On the contrary
, shopping online is the easiest and most convenient way
of shopping. Every big brand now supports online shopping via the website or from the application. Many people
like this
way
of shopping because of the convenience and the comfort. In addition
, there is a more variety of the products as well as more sales options. Moreover
, you can buy many different types of items without going to different shops. For example
, people
can buy Nike shoes and play station just by switching applications. Thus
people
like online shopping because of convenience, less effort and more options.
In conclusion, While people
may vary in their choices. I like online shopping because it gives me more control over price checking and gives me more buying options.Submitted by igooku on
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