The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Cybersecurity is a challenging issue in the modern world.
While
I partly agree that to prevent internet violations ministry should take action to control the online platforms to ensure users’ safety online. However
, it is also
a
responsibility of an individual to be careful about online fraud.
Correct article usage
the
Firstly
, the higher authority of any nation ought to adjust the national framework. This
means countries must focus on updating and developing national internet regulation strategies. For example
, In Australia, the government develop
cybersecurity laws to prevent, investigate, and take action against cybercrime. Wrong verb form
developed
Secondly
, awareness campaigns should organise
for the public to know what kind of threats they may have faced online and how to be cautious about them. Wrong verb form
be organised
Moreover
, improving cyber forensics facilities by governments can ensure user safety to prevent cyber misconduct and speed up the investigation.
Whereas the
public Correct word choice
The
also
must consider their role in saving themselves from such
crimes. For example
, individuals should think twice before clicking links or attachments, protect personal passwords, and verify requests for private information. They must update their knowledge and get information about online safety by getting assistance from authorised governmental sites for free. These cooperative measures can be taken by governments and citizens to overcome the issue of virtual crimes.
To summarize, I somewhat agree governments must take action against cyber breaches by adjusting the country frameworks to regulate the internet boundaries about updating and developing online security methods, as well as
cybersecurity laws and forensics facilities need to improve to speed up the investigation. Individuals also
share this
responsibility by having awareness
of how to be careful and safe from online cyber-attacks.Correct article usage
an awareness
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