Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time.

People have different ideas about how children should occupy their spare

time

. While some people argue that it is better for teenagers to spend their

time

with

group

tasks, others believe that sole activity is

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option. In my opinion, for youngsters

group

activity more beneficial than they play whit themselves. It is undeniable that

group

activities because

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many

reason

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are important in

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child

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life.

Firstly

, they can learn how to communicate with peer groups that represent the small scale of society.

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, it

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their social behaviour.

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they will learn how to help each other in

different

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situation

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. It means that

adolescent

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can prepare

for

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social

skills

for future tasks.

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, making a friend is

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skill that by

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working, they can promote it learn it how to behave with your same age’s

group

.

Finally

, it can be clearly seen that teenager can improve their ability

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.

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, some people argue that free

time

activity should be unique for each

children

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and by spending

time

by themselves they can learn more

skills

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sometimes juveniles need to be done their work and it can help them to be independent and it lead to self-reliance.

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the same

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, because of loneliness they may get into depression and making fiend and socializing will be hard for them

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in aggressive

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with their family and

school mates

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.

As a result

, these teenagers cannot adapt

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society and prefer to stay in their own zone

instead

of

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in

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communities. In conclusion,

although

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can improve a few

skills

by playing themselves, many useful social

skills

only can be reached

by

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group

activities that have

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item

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for child development.