The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
in breakfast
, lunch
, dinner
and snacks
consumed by USA
citizens. Excessive consumption Correct your spelling
US
with
any type of these nutrients may be detrimental to health.
Generally speaking, Americans eat relatively healthier in their Change preposition
of
breakfast
because lesser in sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
. Lunch
and dinner
contains
the highest portions in Change the verb form
contain
sodium
and fat while
snacks
has
the highest Change the verb form
have
sugar
level.
The first chart shows the daily consumption of sodium
. Dinner
consists a
significant ratio Change preposition
of a
43
% Change preposition
of 43
in
salt Change preposition
apply
while
29% in Correct word choice
and
lunch
. Snacks
and breakfast
include equal
percentage which is 14%. The Correct article usage
an equal
second
chart outlines the percentage of saturated fat, dinner
has the highest fat which made up of
37%, Change preposition
apply
lunch
contributes 26% followed by 21% in snacks
and 16% in breakfast
.
The last
chart describes added sugar
in meals, snacks
hold highest
figures in Correct article usage
the highest
sugar
which is 42%. Dinner
takes up 23% sugar
Change preposition
of sugar
while
lunch
and breakfast
contain 19% and 16% respectively.Submitted by huui9000 on
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