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Some people believe that children should be made disciplined by making them obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others, however, believe that those children who are controlled are not well-prepared to tackle the challenges life brings to them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 training has been the subject of debate in cultural diversity. While I personally believe it depends on different training families that
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growing children and how their
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 shape up. On the one hand, many commentators are of the view that there are some advantages to growing up our progeny under our
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 those subscribe to the view that children who
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 not be successful in the contemporary world. they argue that their self-confidence has been gotten by
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 nobody pay attention to each other. So, You can not do any task lonely because your self-esteem had been missed. To sum up, I would argue that we should go ahead
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 faces.
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